Thesis and Rough Draft Notes
The rest of my paper and my research are supposed to work together to prove that people liked this film because they can understand why others, and maybe themselves, keep using Facebook. In addition, I tie in research and my own reasoning for why Mark Zuckerberg created Facebook in the first place. His story of success is ironic and can be relatable in some people's cases, and also is a little crazy of how Zuckerberg makes it big with his social media site. I want this paper to show that the reasoning of people who keep using Facebook makes sense, and maybe the movie helps show that. This idea can register with all of the people who use Facebook today because they might be able to identify with any of the reasons that people keep logging back into their accounts.
1.Do any paragraphs get off topic at any point, or does it feel like they sticks to the argument presented in the thesis?
2.Does the concept/thesis of this paper make sense to you and can you get a sense of what I want to talk about after reading it?